This is my Uthopia! Give me feedback And what do you what your Utopia to be ! ?

Thursday, June 11, 2009

Hello fellow bloggers :)

Hello and welcome to my UTOPIA


This is a place were adults can turn back to children, children stay as children this is a land which gave people Peter Pan Wendy & of course Captian Hook.

People dont need to be a orphan like the lost boys in Peter Pan. This is a place were you can only go if you belive ! My utopia is a place were animals and humans live in peace, it is were technolgy hasnt ruined the young minds!

This is a place were terrisoms and racism is abolished. Every one is equal there is no ruined lives with war !


My utopia is a place which i want to the world !


What do you think ?

3 comments:

  1. try and getmore info lydia. more pictures would be good.

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  2. heyy

    its good, could be improved, and gadgets, pictures make it detailed and happier.

    as miss. radcliffe has said, remove the smileys as it is not formal.

    Plus ** you've spelt UTOPIA wrong
    ** you've spelt BOYS wrong

    good job though

    x

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